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Somber Greetings, Kittens!

In light of the day, I've moved from my more comedic offerings from A Way To A Dragon's Heart and back to my PsiCorps series. This is PsiCorps #3, tentatively titled Saint Valentine.

Enjoy.
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“I don’t care,” she interrupted. “I cared when you came in, but we’ve passed that point, so let me tell you my name instead. I’m Agent Riley Valin, but there are quite a few that use Kali Valin, I’m open to both; either way, you need to go and say those names to someone who’s been in the building more than two minutes. Otherwise you need to rapidly experience the good fortune of spinning the wheel and buying a clue, so you know where you stand in this situation.”

"So what, you’re The Doctor in this situation?” he laughed.

Riley smiled, “My inner geek loves you just a little bit for that fandom reference, but my outer bitch is about to hurt your sense of self-esteem.”

Date: 2011-09-11 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I had a chuckle at The Doctor reference.

She does sound like she's going to inflict some pain if he doesn't listen.

Happy Six, Xakara!

Amy Ruttan
www.amyruttan.com
www.acruttan.com

SSS

Date: 2011-09-11 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melyndaprice.wordpress.com (from livejournal.com)
LOL! I love the last line :)

six sentence sunday

Date: 2011-09-11 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gemma parkes (from livejournal.com)
I loved the last line too! Brilliant!

Love the characterization

Date: 2011-09-11 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cassandra carr (from livejournal.com)
Gotta love a kick-ass heroine!

Date: 2011-09-11 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taryn kincaid (from livejournal.com)
Intriguing!

Date: 2011-09-11 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisa fox (from livejournal.com)
That last line is excellent!

Love the Six

Date: 2011-09-11 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
What's not to love about a K-A heroine? Anya

Cherie Marks' comment

Date: 2011-09-11 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cherie marks (from livejournal.com)
Tough chick! Now it's on! Great six!

SSS

Date: 2011-09-11 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gem sivad (from livejournal.com)
I don't think she's impressed with him--and he should probably worry about that. Great six!

Sandi Sookoo

Date: 2011-09-11 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Oh, I love the duality of her character!

Date: 2011-09-11 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Hahaha! Spinning the wheel and buying a clue! Loved that line, nice work :)

Kelly Said

Inner/Outer

Date: 2011-09-11 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I love "inner geek" and "outer bitch." Good writing.

Sandy N. - http://iousex.blogspot.com

Date: 2011-09-11 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alix (from livejournal.com)
Inner geek and outer bitch..I love it.

SSS 11/9

Date: 2011-09-11 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimfaulks.wordpress.com (from livejournal.com)
Ohh, what a nasty bitch! I LOVE her. Excellent six and look forward to reading more.

Date: 2011-09-11 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] srlmort.livejournal.com
OOh I love it hunny!

I cant wait to open these books and begin reading.

:D Feel better soon and thx for the support!

Excellent

Date: 2011-09-11 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah grimm (from livejournal.com)
Excellent six! I can't wait to read more.

Date: 2011-09-11 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wow, she told him! This sounds so great! :)

Date: 2011-09-11 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sonyaclark.net (from livejournal.com)
Great six! I love Riley's attitude.

Date: 2011-09-11 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Love the last line. Great hook

Great SIx!!

Date: 2011-09-12 01:09 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
HA! LOVED that last line!

Date: 2011-09-12 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lexcade.livejournal.com
Hehehe. Riley sounds AWESOME. I can't wait for this one, Xakara!

Date: 2011-09-12 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
I'm glad that the reference to The Doctor made you smile! It was awesome to have the chance to slip it in there. :)

~X

Re: SSS

Date: 2011-09-12 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks! It's a favorite :)

~X

Re: six sentence sunday

Date: 2011-09-12 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks, Gemma! It was so much fun to write :)

~X

Re: Love the characterization

Date: 2011-09-12 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Right? Riley is one of my favorites :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks, I appreciate it, Lisa! :)

~X

Re: Love the Six

Date: 2011-09-12 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
I know, they just make you smile! :)

~X

Re: Cherie Marks' comment

Date: 2011-09-12 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Yep, it's reach that point where he better recognize! :)

~X

Re: SSS

Date: 2011-09-12 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Yep, he should definitely worry about it! :)

~X

Re: Sandi Sookoo

Date: 2011-09-12 08:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
So do I! I'm so glad it came through so clearly :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks so much, it makes me smile :)

~X

Re: Inner/Outer

Date: 2011-09-12 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks, I appreciate it1 :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
I thought you might. *grin*

~X

Re: SSS 11/9

Date: 2011-09-12 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm getting there on the feeling better part of things! :)

~X

Re: Excellent

Date: 2011-09-12 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
I can't wait until it's out! :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
She's awesome! I have a lot of fun with her. :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

~X

Re: Great SIx!!

Date: 2011-09-12 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

~X

Date: 2011-09-12 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
She's my second fave that I've written after Dante. The thing she has on Dante is that Riley has a very clear sense of who she is, even in the midst of great change. It's great to get to write her! :)

~X

awesome last line!

Date: 2011-09-13 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j h (from livejournal.com)
...Seriously, I think it's the best i've read out of all the SSS so far (and I read every last one, except the smutty ones ;p)

Re: awesome last line!

Date: 2011-09-13 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that :)

~X

SSS Response 9/11

Date: 2011-09-13 08:32 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Totally AWESOME! Love Riley's response!!!

Kathleen Grieve
www.kathleengrieve.com

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