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Greetings, Kittens!

Thank you for coming by again this week. The following is a little after last week's offering from DAWN'S EARLY LIGHT. It's still Ajay and Kincaid being observed by Mackenzie.

Enjoy.



It happened so quickly, Mackenzie missed the smaller details. One moment they were facing each other, the belt in both their hands and the tension between them threatening to take on physical form. The next moment Ajay’s upper body lay face-down across the dresser in the center of the closet, the belt cinched tight over his wrists, the end wrapped several times around Kincaid’s right hand.

“Don’t fight me, Ajay."

It took several tries for Ajay to form the panting breaths into words. “That would defeat the purpose.”



 Other Six Sentence Sunday Contributors

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Date: 2011-07-17 12:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisa fox (from livejournal.com)
HOT! Wow.

Date: 2011-07-18 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

Date: 2011-07-17 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] romancingalix.wordpress.com (from livejournal.com)
Super hot and super WOW. I love you picked this snippet!

Date: 2011-07-18 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
I love that you recognized it! *grin*

Date: 2011-07-17 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sandra sookoo (from livejournal.com)
Now that is a hot predicament!

Date: 2011-07-18 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Indeed and it goes all the right places. *wink*

Date: 2011-07-17 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stacey kennedy (from livejournal.com)
Dear Lord that was a sizzling snippet! *shivers* *fans self* I WANT MORE!! I have to get this book!

Date: 2011-07-18 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
I'd love your feedback when you do! :)

Date: 2011-07-17 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ranae rose (from livejournal.com)
Oh, intense. I like! :)

Date: 2011-07-18 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-07-17 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lizculver.wordpress.com (from livejournal.com)
Oh my! Sexy six!

Date: 2011-07-18 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks, it's a favorite scene!

Date: 2011-07-17 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dee carney (from livejournal.com)
Nicely done! More please!

Date: 2011-07-18 05:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
As you wish! *grin*

Date: 2011-07-17 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wow, that was fast! Somebody's in trouble now.

Cara Bristol
http://www.carabristol.com

Date: 2011-07-18 05:22 am (UTC)

Oh, yeah.

Date: 2011-07-17 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Nicely done! Can't wait to read more!

Re: Oh, yeah.

Date: 2011-07-18 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you! I can't wait to share more! :)

Oops

Date: 2011-07-17 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah grimm (from livejournal.com)
Forgot to change it off anonymous. That last comment was from me. :)

Re: Oops

Date: 2011-07-18 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
No problem, thanks for letting me know.

Date: 2011-07-17 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Guess someone should have paid attention to the details.

Date: 2011-07-18 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
It's all about the details that come next! *grin*

Date: 2011-07-17 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joanne kenrick (from livejournal.com)
intense, fast action -- doesn't look like Ajay is too unhappy about the predicament, though LOL Fab six xx

Date: 2011-07-18 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Nope, he's not. It's just where he wanted to be. :)

Date: 2011-07-18 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bree younger (from livejournal.com)
Wow! Great emotional snippet.

Date: 2011-07-18 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2011-07-18 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diannehartsock.wordpress.com (from livejournal.com)
Wow. Very nice set-up for the next scene! Next week?

Date: 2011-07-18 05:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Yep. Next week it is. :)

Date: 2011-07-18 04:54 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Whew! That's intense. And so hot.

Date: 2011-07-18 05:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you, I appreciate it. :)

Date: 2011-07-18 05:44 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Intriguing! And I love your little Supernatural clip - very funny! :)
xo, Zee

Date: 2011-07-18 06:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
I LOVE my SPN mood theme. It's my favorite thing about being on LJ. *Grin*

Date: 2011-07-18 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wearegoingonawitchhunt.wordpress.com (from livejournal.com)
Wow - that was intense! She is making him work!

Date: 2011-07-18 07:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
All the participants are male in this particular scene, but yes, work is being made on all sides. *grin*

Date: 2011-07-18 08:43 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Mercy! Fantastic!

Kathleen Grieve
www.kathleengrieve.com

Date: 2011-07-18 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks, Kathleen! :)

SSS

Date: 2011-07-18 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gem sivad (from livejournal.com)
Tension delivered adroitly in six action packed lines. Great six.

Re: SSS

Date: 2011-07-18 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks for the compliment! I appreciate it. :)

Date: 2011-07-18 11:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jennifer lowery (kamptner) (from livejournal.com)
Whew! Hot six! Very nicely written. These two are going to be good together!
Thanks!

Date: 2011-07-18 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
I agree! One of the things so great about book 3 is getting to see the full extent of where book 2 leads with those two.

Six Sentence Sunday

Date: 2011-07-18 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wow, intense!

Jennifer Wilck
www.jenniferwilck.com

Re: Six Sentence Sunday

Date: 2011-07-18 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

Date: 2011-07-18 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Nice. Hope Kincaid's not that fast in everything he does.

-Eleri Stone

Date: 2011-07-18 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
You only need speed and strength when you're trying to get away with something. Besides, it's not how fast you go, but how many times in a row you can go that fast. *grin*

Date: 2011-07-18 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lexcade.livejournal.com
Oh wow. I'm hooked. Where is this going??? ;)

Date: 2011-07-18 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
All the right places, fortunately! But not at all where people assume. :)

Date: 2011-07-18 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
So will he or won't he?!

Pippa Jay

Date: 2011-07-18 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Isn't that always the question?

Wow!

Date: 2011-07-18 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cate masters (from livejournal.com)
Steamy and intense. Great six!
Cate
http://catemasters.blogspot.com

Re: Wow!

Date: 2011-07-18 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xakara.livejournal.com
Thank you, Cate!
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