Six Sentence Sunday #4

[xakara]

Greetings, Kittens!

Thank you all for coming back again, I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. I've been asked for another glimpse of DAWN'S EARLY LIGHT, so in honor of it being a bright, shiny new release, I'll oblige. This is a scene between Kincaid, (Marshal Ides from GHOST OF CHRISTMAS PAST) and Ajay, (Agent McDaniels, Riley's Partner while Torrin was in the coma).

Enjoy.

 

Kincaid seemed to hesitate and then he shook himself. “Right now the only activity you need to do is back your pretty little ass up and try on the shirt; and don’t go accidentally dropping that towel trying to entice somebody.”

“Yes, sir,” Ajay backed up. “No accidents involved.” He took off the towel and draped it over his shoulder. “Now that’s out of the way, do I get the same points for looking back over my shoulder that I do for looking up?”


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Comments

[romancingalix.wordpress.com (from livejournal.com)]

You are such a marvelous story teller. Thank you so much for another fantastic snippet.

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thank you for the complimenta nd brightening my day! :)

[moondancerdrake.livejournal.com]

Sassy! Very nice!

http://bit.ly/mWn001

[xakara.livejournal.com]

I love Ajay! This was his moment to shine in book 2, and much to my delight, book 3 is his. Yay!

Love the banter!

[(Anonymous)]

Good luck with all the release week hard work. Great chemistry between these two!

Re: Love the banter!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It's Mackenzie's story, but I love Ajay and Kincaid in it. I love them even more in book 3!

Love it!

[sarah grimm (from livejournal.com)]

Fantastic, sassy six! Love it!

Re: Love it!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Sassy is a good word. *grin*

[kerrianne coombes (from livejournal.com)]

Cheeky - Hot... I like it! LOL Great SSS!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

So glad you like it! I'll have to give a look at what happened next. :)

[echomc.livejournal.com]

Love Ajay's reaction! Nice six

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Well you can't drop a towel you've taken off and removed from the occassion, right? *wink*

[jessica subject (from livejournal.com)]

Ajay is playing him so well. Great six! :)

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Yes he is! Right where he want him. :)

[lisa fox (from livejournal.com)]

Love that dialogue! Playful and sassy!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I was so glad their banter and ease came through so quickly. It's a very large cast to work with and it's not his story, so there was little time to get Ajay and Kincaid together on screen. But I think it played nicely.

[(Anonymous)]

Somehow I think there's going to be an accident anyway. Nice six.

Cara Bristol
http://www.carabristol.com

[xakara.livejournal.com]

If by accident, you mean things that happen on purpose but everyone feigns innocence? Agreed. *grin*

[sandra sookoo (from livejournal.com)]

LOL sexy and playful. Loved it!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Sandra! I need to do the whole chapter, I loved it. :)

Enjoyed!

[laura kaye (from livejournal.com)]

Great playful banter! Well done!

Re: Enjoyed!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Yours was great. We need to do an author exchange because I'm too poor to buy books. *smile*

Jenna Jaxon's Comment:

[(Anonymous)]

Not quite sure what's going on, but getting the towel out of the way got my attention. Sexy six.

Re: Jenna Jaxon's Comment:

[xakara.livejournal.com]

And really, getting the towel out of the way to have him standing there buck naked is really all one needs to understand. *grin*

[(Anonymous)]

Lol. He is quite something!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Ain't he? So glad he got his moments in DEL and gets all of PsiCorps 3 to shine.

[(Anonymous)]

*g* Nice six and congrats on your upcoming release, Xakara!

~Nichelle
www.nichellegregory.com

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thanks, hon! But it went past upcoming and hit arrival last week Monday. I had a great week promoing it, but I admit, it feels like three weeks rather than just one. *smile*

Sassy indeed!

[(Anonymous)]

Alisha Robinson: What a sassy snippet that was! Great 6!

http://robinsonalisha.blogspot.com

Re: Sassy indeed!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

I'm guessing sassy is going to be Ajay's catchword, nice. *smile*

Thanks so much!

Sassy eh?

[sassyspeaks.wordpress.com (from livejournal.com)]

Playful certainly - and nothing wrong with play

Re: Sassy eh?

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Indeed, not a thing wrong with play. *grin*

[dee carney (from livejournal.com)]

HAHA! Cute!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Yes it/they is/are! *smile*

[(Anonymous)]

Ooh...that is a racy six. I like it a lot and I love your cover. I'm all about interracial pairs. Good work.

~Piper

[xakara.livejournal.com]

That is my favorite cover thus far! Thank you so much. :)

[vernac.myopenid.com (from livejournal.com)]

Sexy and playful banter!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Just as it was meant to be. *grin* Thanks for letting me know it worked. :)

[desiresdd.livejournal.com]

Wonderful six hun!

:D

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thanks, sweety! Always appreciated. As if your avatar *wink*

[fairytales81.livejournal.com]

lol, interesting six!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thanks. :)

[ranae rose (from livejournal.com)]

LOL, sounds like he knows her well enough to know just what to watch out for.

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Both are male, but yes, Kincaid knows him well. :)

[(Anonymous)]

Ha! That is more than cute! You write very well.

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Well, thank you very much!

[hoagyf.livejournal.com]

Someone's flirtin'! And doing a great job of it too! Fun, sexy six :)

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Definitely on the path to getting what he wants!

[bree younger (from livejournal.com)]

Cute and playful scene!

[xakara.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Next week, a bit of nakedness perhaps. *grin*