Thursday Thirteen 13th Edition
Nov. 8th, 2007 01:11 am
Welcome to my 13th Thursday Thirteen. Originally this was going to be a list of 13 things I learned over the last 13 weeks doing TT. I had a growing list and everything. Then NaNoWriMo started and I worked the very next night leaving me to write longhand for the last week. This in turn left me transcribing my pages all day Wednesday and so I have THE FORGIVEN on the brain right now and in turn you must too have it in your head. Don't think of it as "misery loving company", but more of creative psychosis craving companionship. That's so much more accurate in this case.
And so for this 13th edition I bring you the first 13 paragraphs of THE FORGIVEN, which so happens to be the prologue. It was meant to be. :) (I'll even number them for the compulsive among you)
Enjoy.
1) I fought against the forces of Heaven and Hell and now it is time to fight them again. But I am ahead of myself. An explanation is required.
2) On all possible worlds, holding all possible truths, there are those in which a war was waged in Heaven. This is not one of those worlds. Here, The Great War was waged upon Earth herself, and in the end the world lay flooded because of our collective pride. But the War did not begin in pride, nor lust as it would be believed. No, the War Against Heaven began with Love. The Love of Celestial Beings for that of Human Beings. For as Elohim so Loved them how could We, their Watchers, do anything less?
3) Placed upon the Earth as guardians, the Grigori watched Humanity grow and prosper, far from the
4) So beautiful were they in their innocence, so exuberant in their thirst for knowledge, so alluring in their desire to please and be loved that We could not look away. Nor was it Our place to turn from them, they whom We had been set by Heaven to watch over with an unblinking eye.
5) From the depth of that unwavering stare We were dazzled by the shine of their divine potential and Love blossomed through Our Being for those We watched over. In time We took to Us Human mates and had born to Us offspring of great power. They came to be known as the Nephilim. To Us they are the Celeste, heavenly children to embody our Love of Humanity, and through them, Our Love of Elohim.
6) When We stepped forward from the Light and from the Shadow to live beside Our Human mates, great civilizations sprang up around our Divine offspring and Humanity soared to its greatest achievements. They mastered the arts and sciences of reality and began to reach for new ones. They understood their bodies and their physical place in the world and walked the Earth with unshakeable confidence. And to Our great shame, beneath Our watchful eye, their spirit began to suffer.
7) They began to believe in what they could see and touch over what they could feel inside during the great quiet of true reflection. They turned to Us and Our offspring and found new gods to replace the Creative Divinity Of All Worlds and saw in Us a greatness equal to Elohim Itself. Our offspring, having never seen Heaven, looked upon themselves in the mirror of Human awe and accordingly they took to become the gods they were praised as.
8) And as would always be the case, down the path of pride, lay wickedness.
9) It was not universal, nor was it a majority, but you need only a powerful few to change the course of the world. Because We could not curtail the spiraling effects of Our offspring and in some cases, Ourselves, We were called Home to Heaven.
10) Some refused to abandon their base of power, others refused to abandon their families, and still others returned to Heaven and never looked back. This division could not last as a mere dissension of opinion and desire, and it grew, as it had to, into a full rebellion. And from that rebellion came The Great Fall.
11) One side was led by Samyaza, leader of the Grigori. One side was led by Michael in defense of Heaven. Then there was a third side, my side, those of the Us who wished to remain with Our families and yet still remain in the service of Elohim. We fought not to be taken and We fought to keep Samyaza and his issue from taking over Heaven as We knew it.
12) In the end, Samyaza was cast from Heaven and into the dominions of Hell. With one less battlefront We turned Our swords toward Heaven and wept to raise them high. With Our tears We watered the seeds of Elohim’s Divine mercy and Heaven ceased trying to take Us back. The doors were shut but We were always welcome to return. We fell from Heaven but not from grace.
13) We are The Forgiven. And Our battle has come anew.
~From the Hand of Eldan, Keeper of The Forgiven, Beloved of Elohim
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Date: 2007-11-08 07:29 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-11-08 11:20 am (UTC)~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:13 am (UTC)Happy TT!
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Date: 2007-11-08 11:21 am (UTC)Thanks for the encouragment. :)
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Date: 2007-11-08 11:09 am (UTC)http://thenononsense.blogspot.com/
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Date: 2007-11-08 11:22 am (UTC)May you have a good week too.
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Date: 2007-11-08 11:47 am (UTC)And now you've got me wondering if you're going to send it to me as you get it written or make me wait for the whole thing...
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:18 pm (UTC)The edits skipped me ahead and there's a hole I have to write my way back to filling in. Not now of course, because that's editing. Right now I'm dedicated to forward movement. Mostly. Almost. Sorta?
But worry not, you'll get the first bits and pieces as they become semi-lucid in a month. *wink*
~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 11:54 am (UTC)I hope you get your black beans; they are my favorite! Just this past Monday I made bean, rice and cheese enchiladas and used Frijoles Negros. :D
Hope you stop by again. I know I will!
http://www.secretagentmama.com/blog
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:20 pm (UTC)So far it looks like I might not get my black beans, but red beans and rice are in the forecast. :)
I'll definitely stop by again.
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Date: 2007-11-08 12:32 pm (UTC)http://moondancerdrake.livejournal.com/
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:23 pm (UTC)It took everything in me to post the above as it was without endless tinkering. I like it as is, but that submission mindset is hard to shake where you feel you need to go over something 10 times just to have it beta read.
I'm mellowing out though. And thank you for the compliment, it means a great deal to me. This'll be the post I come back and read when I start to wonder if I should really try to do this for a living...
~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 01:08 pm (UTC)- Tempest
http://midnightmooncafe.blogspot.com/
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:26 pm (UTC)~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 01:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-11-08 10:28 pm (UTC)~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 01:46 pm (UTC)Oh, and my most played on my mp3 player is a mash-up of the Dresden Dolls, Johnny Cash, Jonathan Larson and Lady Sovereign :D
Have a great Thursday!
Christine at chaoticcrafter (http://chaoticcrafter.wordpress.com/)
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:30 pm (UTC)I'll have to search YouTube for the mash-up, it sounds like a "must hear".
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Date: 2007-11-08 01:52 pm (UTC)I loved your comment about the people around you being so bundled up, they all look alike. OMG, I can't believe I didn't think of that and make a point of it!!! I guess because it's not that cold here yet.
Happy TT, babe! Keep on NaNoing so well!
--Susan Helene Gottfried
http://westofmars.blogspot.com
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:35 pm (UTC)We've dropped into the 40's here so the bigger coats are already coming out and I'm starting to see that blend of humanity again. It's a wonderfully equalizing time that last pretty long in the Midwest. People won't crawl back out of their cocoons until April or May, so for a time we get to all be the same. It's the one thing I'd miss about winter if I moved someplace without snow and true cold.
Great to hear from you as always, Susan.
Happy Thursday and see you again soon!
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Date: 2007-11-08 02:24 pm (UTC)Gutsy to put up the chaps :)
Lorelei James
www.loreleijames.com
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:38 pm (UTC)I blame temporary insanity for the sharing. But I figured it was going to be the excerpt on my website so no harm/no foul in the end.
It's all in how you spin it to yourself. ;)
~X
From Carrie http://lovelysalome.blogspot.com
Date: 2007-11-08 03:17 pm (UTC)Re: From Carrie http://lovelysalome.blogspot.com
Date: 2007-11-08 10:39 pm (UTC)At least that's what the motivational poster on the side of my harddrive says. *wink*
Thanks for the compliment.
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Date: 2007-11-08 04:45 pm (UTC)http://singleparentsunite.blogspot.com/
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:42 pm (UTC)Thanks so much for the compliment. I will indeed remember this when I comes time to recruiting beta readers. :)
Thanks for the return visit. Seeya next week if not before.
~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 04:48 pm (UTC)Happy TT!!
Harlekwin at Boho Rhap (http://bohorap.blogspot.com)
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:45 pm (UTC)Your autographed copy is on the list! :)
Happy TT
~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 05:05 pm (UTC)http://www.annaguirre.com/blog.html
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:48 pm (UTC)~X
From The Gal Herself at One Gal's Musings
Date: 2007-11-08 05:10 pm (UTC)Re: From The Gal Herself at One Gal's Musings
Date: 2007-11-08 10:51 pm (UTC)Wonderful to know it doesn't read like I'm just typing for the hell of it. I think it starts to feel like that when you can't edit the way you want to and spend a week nailing down a single concept to momentary perfection.
But I'm willing to bet that most who throw in with NaNo for the long haul are actually producing better stuff than they give themselves credit for.
I shall indeed keep going and thanks for the return visit. :)
~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 05:19 pm (UTC)Re: Thursday Thirteen
Date: 2007-11-08 10:54 pm (UTC)I've disliked falling behind, but I've liked the process of being intimate with the story.
Thanks for the return visit. :)
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Date: 2007-11-08 05:26 pm (UTC)Natalie a.k.a. redsoxmommy.blogspot.com
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:55 pm (UTC)I'll make sure to swing by your blog when I'm done with comments.
Happy TT :)
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Date: 2007-11-08 05:32 pm (UTC)Mine is up:
http://bdmeme2.blogspot.com/
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:56 pm (UTC)I'll be off to read yours in the not too long. ;)
Thanks for the visit.
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Date: 2007-11-08 05:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-11-08 10:56 pm (UTC)~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 05:44 pm (UTC)--Darla
http://nichtszusagen.blogspot.com
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:58 pm (UTC)Music to my ears!
The rest of the book is coming as quickly as circumstance and obsessive compulsive dedication will allow. *Wink*
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Vixen
Date: 2007-11-08 05:55 pm (UTC)http://vixensden.wordpress.com
Do you mind that I added you to my blogroll?
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Date: 2007-11-08 11:02 pm (UTC)Thanks for the add and the compliment :D
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Date: 2007-11-08 06:53 pm (UTC)Re: http://kellymccrady.blogspot.com
Date: 2007-11-08 11:08 pm (UTC)Everyone's compliments have firmly achored me in the mindset of finishing The Forgiven over switching stories.
Of course...I could write both. No, wait, that's madness.
But still...
~X
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Date: 2007-11-08 08:06 pm (UTC)Ah. A bit nostalgic in a way.
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Date: 2007-11-08 11:09 pm (UTC)I'm not sayin', I'm just sayin'....
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Date: 2007-11-08 09:35 pm (UTC)Great TT :-)
Mark
{ http://impworks.blogspot.com/ )
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Date: 2007-11-08 11:10 pm (UTC)~X